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雅思写作高分句型改写
It is important for parents to teach children about money. Why do you think this is important and what is the best way to teach.
最近的常考机考题，为什么父母需要教孩子金钱观，以及如何教？
今天帮大家写了个7.5和9分对比，主要是词句语法方面的分数哦。
7.5 分表达
The absence of this knowledge may result in children adopting detrimental financial habits, such as overspending, excessive reliance on credit cards, and failure to save for the future, all of which can lead to long-term financial difficulties.
9分表达
Conversely, the lack of such financial literacy skills may lead to the development of harmful financial habits, including but not limited to excessive spending, over-reliance on credit cards, and the failure to save for the future, thereby increasing the likelihood of long-term financial difficulties.
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