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雅思写作高分句型：父母教孩子金钱重要性
最近的常考机考题，为什么父母需要教孩子金钱观，以及如何教？
一道看起来很贴近生活话题的题目，仔细思考观点时发现，切入点都特别小，很难写出逻辑的完整性。今天帮大家写了个7.5和9分对比，主要是词句语法方面的分数哦。大家可以学习一下用词的区别，灵活运用到其他话题中～最近有机考的小伙伴也可以速速准备起来啦！！
7.5 分表达
The absence of this knowledge may result in children adopting detrimental financial habits, such as overspending, excessive reliance on credit cards, and failure to save for the future, all of which can lead to long-term financial difficulties.
9分表达
Conversely, the lack of such financial literacy skills may lead to the development of harmful financial habits, including but not limited to excessive spending, over-reliance on credit cards, and the failure to save for the future, thereby increasing the likelihood of long-term financial difficulties.
雅思考试压力还是蛮大的，我们找雅思培训机构就是奔着效果去的，考察的也主要是教学质量和性价比这两个点。跟对老师，找对方法至关重要。如果看完以上内容，大家还有什么想问的~可以拨打电话或者添加微信
2024-1-4 |
